We were learning about what we did in lockdown.
I found it easy to write it down because the things I have written were in my mind good.
I found it hard to put my words into sentences.
I really enjoyed seeing what others did in lockdown.
Next time I need to add more describing words.
Hi Georgia, this is Estella. I am a year seven at gis int and was at your school last year. I really like your work, as it is a good idea. I like how you are talking about coming out of lockdown and going back to school, most of the things you were saying hello to (except the one about your friends) were things that you did not like and the goodbye's were about things you would miss. I didn't really like going back to school either to be honest. This is very cool!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work!
Hi Estella. Thanks for the Positive feedback.
DeleteHI Georgia, it's Sarah here I am from Gis Int and I love your blog and your amazing writing. I think it was very relatable and well written. You can look at my blog at https://gisintsarahb.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHI Sarah, Thank you I do get some comments about how my writing is but not normally. Lockdown I hardly wanted to get out of bed but I had to, to my school work. I will definitely look at your blog. :)
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